He was indeed closing. I count 6 different places where he did. They are not direct closes, but nudges towards getting you to contact him. Can't really do a big close on such type of situation, because nobody (well, Brad Pitt might) will bring a kid from miles away without knowing him a little first.
By the way, he is using the compassion close.
Don’t decide now. Please write me
and we'll see how we get
on with each other...
He is aiming right to your heart and hitting.
Much better copy than most startups out there. I agree. Which brings out an important point. If you want to sell something, you better be convinced and believe 100% in it. Otherwise, your copy is going to be bad.
By the way, he is using the compassion close.
Don’t decide now. Please write me and we'll see how we get on with each other...
He is aiming right to your heart and hitting.
Much better copy than most startups out there. I agree. Which brings out an important point. If you want to sell something, you better be convinced and believe 100% in it. Otherwise, your copy is going to be bad.